[Eliza]

Love and get married is big different so after get married many couple have to deal with a lot of new happen, one of that to be jealous is usually mentioned
at an office, one lady said: hey! all girls in room,listen to me: if you are going to get married, you should choose a smart Batata instead Potato, when your husband is Potato he isn't yours! then she sighed and said: Hiya.. now I'm very tired to keep "my Potato".

: dear my friends! this is a simple topic i wrote, there are some mistake in it, please help me to correct it, thanks for advance.

[nhocli2603]

Eliza, on 30 April 2010 - 03:21 PM, said:

Love and get married is big different so after get married many couple have to deal with a lot of new happen, one of that to be jealous is usually mentioned
at an office, one lady said: hey! all girls in room,listen to me: if you are going to get married, you should choose a smart Batata instead Potato, when your husband is Potato he isn't yours! then she sighed and said: Hiya.. now I'm very tired to keep "my Potato".

: dear my friends! this is a simple topic i wrote, there are some mistake in it, please help me to correct it, thanks for advance.

hiii, Nhocli tìm thấy những lỗi sau. Là theo Nhocli ấy nhé, nếu có gì mong mọi người chỉ thêm.

" Love and get married is big different so after getting married many couple have to deal with a lot of new happenning, one of that it's to be jealous is usually mentioned
at an office, one lady said: hey! all girls in the room,listen to me: if you are going to get married, you should choose a smart Batata instead Potato, when your husband is Potato he isn't yours! then she sighed and said: Hiya.. now I'm very tired to keep "my Potato".

: my dear friends! this is a simple topic i wrote, there are some mistake in it, please help me to correct it, thanks in advance.

Chủ đề này được biên tập bởi nhocli2603: 01 Tháng năm 2010 - 07:47 PM

[Eliza]

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I'm so sorry to keep you waiting sooooooo long time. First, i want to say that you did a good job Nhoc!. I agree at the sentences below:

-" Love and get married" is big different so after getting married many couple have to deal with a lot of new happenning.
- thanks in advance.

Love and get married is big different so after getting married many couple have to deal with a lot of new happenning, one of that jealousy is usually mentioned
at an office, one lady said: hey! all girls in this room,listen to me: if you are going to get married, you should choose a smart Batata instead Potato, when your husband is Potato he isn't yours! then she sighed and said: Hiya.. now I'm very tired to keep "my Potato".

: dear my friends! this is a simple topic i wrote, there are some mistake in it, please help me to correct it, thanks in advance.

In Vietnamese what i means:

Yêu nhau và kết hôn là hai chuyện hoàn toàn khác nhau. sau khi kết hôn nhiều cặp vợ chồng phải đối mặt với nhiều vấn đề rắc rối, trong số đó chuyện ghen tuông hay được đề cặp tới
Tại một văn phòng nọ có một người phụ nữ lên tiếng rằng: các cô gái trong phòng nghe này: nếu các em chuẩn bị lấy chồng, các em nên chọn củ khoai lang thông minh thay vì khoai tây, khi chồng của các em là khoai tây thì anh ấy không phải là của các em đâu, sau đó chị ta thở dài và nói: Bi giờ tôi rất mệt mỏi để giữ củ khoai tây của mình

Tái bút: các bạn thân mến: đây là một chủ để mà mình viết ra nhưng trong đó có vài lỗi sai, làm ơn giúp mình sữa nó nhé, cảm ơn trước nha.

[Vi Dang - Nicky]

For me, we can correct some mistakes here as following:

"Love and get married" (we should add quotation mask here) is big different, so after getting married many couples have to deal with a lot of new happen troubles (or problems) (happen is a verb not a noun and the word new here is unnecessary) . One of that these to be is jealousness in love is usually mentioned.
At an office, one lady said: "Hey! all girls in room,listen to me! If you are going to get married, you should choose a smart Batata instead Potato. When your husband is Potato, he isn't yours. Then she sighed and said: "Hiya.. now I'm very tired to keep "my Potato"".

PS: Dear my friends, this is a simple topic I wrote. There are some mistake in it. Please help me to correct it! Thanks for your help in advance.

Chủ đề này được biên tập bởi Vi Dang - Nicky: 24 Tháng sáu 2010 - 04:03 PM

[Eliza]

Vi Dang - Nicky, on 24 June 2010 - 03:53 PM, said:

For me, we can correct some mistakes here as following:

"Love and get married" (we should add quotation mask here) is big different, so after getting married many couples have to deal with a lot of new happen troubles (or problems) (happen is a verb not a noun and the word new here is unnecessary) . One of that these to be is jealousness in love is usually mentioned.
At an office, one lady said: "Hey! all girls in room,listen to me! If you are going to get married, you should choose a smart Batata instead Potato. When your husband is Potato, he isn't yours. Then she sighed and said: "Hiya.. now I'm very tired to keep
"my Potato"".

PS: Dear my friends, this is a simple topic I wrote. There are some mistake in it. Please help me to correct it! Thanks for your help in advance.

Hey Nick, thanks a lot,you are very good at correcting me! but why don't we use 'that" at :one of that jealousy is usually mentioned. why can't i use passive in this case? I would love to hear ur explaination.

[ANJELL]

Love and getting married is a big difference. Therefore, after getting married, many couples have to deal with a lot of troubles, one of those ( or these) is jealousy, which is usually mentioned
At an office, one lady said: hey! all girls in the ( or this ) room,listen to me: if you are going to get married, you should choose a smart Batata instead of Potato, when your husband is Potato, it means he isn't yours! then she sighed and said: Hiya.. now I'm very tired of keeping "my Potato".
dear my friends! this is a simple topic that i wrote, there are some mistakes in it, please help me to correct it, thanks in advance.

Chủ đề này được biên tập bởi ANJELL: 02 Tháng bảy 2010 - 02:37 PM

[Eliza]

ANJELL, on 02 July 2010 - 02:24 PM, said:

Love and getting married is a big difference. Therefore, after getting married, many couples have to deal with a lot of troubles, one of those ( or these) is jealousy, which is usually mentioned
At an office, one lady said: hey! all girls in the ( or this ) room,listen to me: if you are going to get married, you should choose a smart Batata instead of Potato, when your husband is Potato, it means he isn't yours! then she sighed and said: Hiya.. now I'm very tired of keeping "my Potato".
dear my friends! this is a simple topic that i wrote, there are some mistakes in it, please help me to correct it, thanks in advance.

Thank you very much Anjell! welcome to English club.